Monday, September 04, 2006

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周日中午天气晴。温暖的阳光从高处射下,白云皑皑在空中慢飘,海风微微地吹着。

空气干燥,不带水分。在远方,清楚地见到墨尔本中心的高楼往天举。氮蓝的长空和碧蓝的海洋仿佛在水平线会面。

海面的波浪往岸行进,越近岸,波幅越大。离岸十多米,波峰就开始带上白色的泡沫帽。波浪终于猛烈的打上沙滩,消失在一团白泡中。


如果坐在个可以避阳光的地方读书、喝咖啡,多么舒服。

但我得打工。


冬天后的晴天都会有很多人出门玩,而又是澳洲庆祝父亲节的一天。餐馆的客人不停地来,如千年不停的海浪在岸暴打,连坚固的石头都磨碎成沙粒。

傍晚下了一场雨,雨云把阳光挡了,冷风吹着来。眨眼间,海边的人都消失了。幸好天气转冷,不然晚餐又要忙几个小时。


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如果发现有任何的错误、语病等,请读者指教。谢谢。


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5 Comments:

Blogger ChinoDevean said...

aiyah, still sounds so "english", sorry to say so.

Like '清楚地见到墨尔本中心的高楼往天举', are you trying to say something in the vein of 'scraping the sky'??

'饮咖啡', in this context, I think it would be a whole lot approriate to use '喝’.

10:49 pm, September 05, 2006  
Blogger 小李飞刀 said...

Actually, improve alot liao... I'm sure with the help and tutelage of a certain friend, things will only get better...

12:53 am, September 06, 2006  
Blogger Lao Chen said...

ChinoDevean:
Thanks for the feedback.

Yes, that sentence is the worse one of the lot. I could not find a good place to insert the concept of 'being clearly observable'.


小李飞刀:
Haha, certainly.

1:35 am, September 06, 2006  
Blogger ChinoDevean said...

CERTAINly.

12:30 am, September 07, 2006  
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