Sunday, June 19, 2005

Wet Mercedes

Mercedes-Benz W124 E280

It was the twelfth day of January
A breeze blew gently
Rainwater precipitated from the clouds
Atmospheric relative humidity at 100%
The plants rejoiced

The rain stopped; the clouds dispersed
The sky brightened- 3 F-stops, to be precise
Water droplets all around the photographer
All it takes is a good eye to find the detail
And the camera does the remainder

I'm not sure what the 2 blocks of text above can be called. Referring to them as poetry will be insulting to many people.

silencers tells me that Deviant Art would classify them as freeflow poetry.
Ob!ique recomends that they be called a prose.


Blogger Simon said...


9:18 am, June 19, 2005  
Blogger Silencers said...

deviantART would recognize that as a freeflow poetry. This be a good one, might I add :)

2:49 pm, June 19, 2005  
Blogger Lao Chen said...

Thanks for dropping by. Glad I tickled your fancy, not in some perverted way.

Ah, something to categorise that bit of stuff. Beginner's luck, i think.

3:31 pm, June 19, 2005  
Blogger shifty said...

call it a prose:)

4:05 pm, June 19, 2005  
Blogger Lao Chen said...

Brilliant! Much more elegant that "block fo text", and with no obligations to fulfill.

4:56 pm, June 20, 2005  

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