Sunday, June 19, 2005

Wet Mercedes



Mercedes-Benz W124 E280

It was the twelfth day of January
A breeze blew gently
Rainwater precipitated from the clouds
Atmospheric relative humidity at 100%
The plants rejoiced

The rain stopped; the clouds dispersed
The sky brightened- 3 F-stops, to be precise
Water droplets all around the photographer
All it takes is a good eye to find the detail
And the camera does the remainder


I'm not sure what the 2 blocks of text above can be called. Referring to them as poetry will be insulting to many people.

21/6/05-
silencers tells me that Deviant Art would classify them as freeflow poetry.
Ob!ique recomends that they be called a prose.

5 Comments:

Blogger Simon said...

Nice.

9:18 am, June 19, 2005  
Blogger Silencers said...

deviantART would recognize that as a freeflow poetry. This be a good one, might I add :)

2:49 pm, June 19, 2005  
Blogger Lao Chen said...

simon,
Thanks for dropping by. Glad I tickled your fancy, not in some perverted way.

silencers,
Ah, something to categorise that bit of stuff. Beginner's luck, i think.

3:31 pm, June 19, 2005  
Blogger shifty said...

call it a prose:)

4:05 pm, June 19, 2005  
Blogger Lao Chen said...

Brilliant! Much more elegant that "block fo text", and with no obligations to fulfill.

4:56 pm, June 20, 2005  

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